I have never read that one before, but it makes sense, at least how you wrote it. I find Xaldin one of the hardest ones to characterize and I think you did a great job with him. I could see true lust and also tact, remembering what his mission is. It is also nice to read KH fanfiction with Disney characters written well. Very nice job
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ninetydegrees
Interesting Pairing
on 2007-08-21 05:39 pm (UTC)