http://narkiz.livejournal.com/ (
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2008-06-01 11:28 pm (UTC)
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PAssionate story.
"...of the touch of Ritsuka's scarred hands on his body. "
should it be
"of the touch of Ritsuka's hands on his scarred body. "?
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no subject
"...of the touch of Ritsuka's scarred hands on his body. "
should it be
"of the touch of Ritsuka's hands on his scarred body. "?